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女会计师 全自费赴美改

http://www.canachieve.com.cn 发布日期:2009-06-03

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范例20.1 提要

申请者概况

女会计师,全自费赴美读经济学

拒签理由

会计师去美国不读会计学而读经济学专业不符,目的不明,没有实在的学习计划,有移民倾向被拒签

申诉重点

从工作的角度强调自己在国内的成功,以及想继续这个成功的出国目的会计师在美国是很容易找工作的,而我的赴美学经济的目的只是为了回国发展学了美国的会计学回国没有用从收入的角度进一步用具体的收入等细节来证明自己的成功国内的成功和机会已经很接近国外的收入

从家庭的角度再次突出自己的幸福生活:幸福的家庭和自己丈夫的成功从丈夫不会离开自己的生意移民美国加强自己不会移民美国这个概念从拿到美国学位之后回国后成功的角度结束自己的不会滞留美国不回来的申辩


范例20.2 原文

Dear Visa Officer ,


My application for a student visa was refused on August I , 1997. The reason for the re-fusal, according to the visa officer, is that I am an accountant and should not study theEconomics in the U. S. Therefore I do not have a solid study plan ,and "logically" I haveimmigration intention.

I do understand the "logic" behind the visa officer’s reasoning on his rejection. I alsoagree that many visa applicants do not have a real study plan and they treat F1 visa justas a ticket to enter their immigration process to the U. S. However, no matter howmany people dream of immigration to the United States ,I am the one who has absolute-ly no such an intention. Other people’s dream is not my fault. Please listen to me and Illgive you my following arguments :

l. A senior accountant in China Southern Investment Bank with a bachelor’s degree inaccounting from China’s top business school ,China University of Economics and Fi-nance , I have enjoyed a great success in my career and in my personal life during thelast four years. Going to the US for an advanced study is an important step for me tofurther promote myself professionally back in China ,not a step to abandon my greatjob and family in China. Why I did not choose Accounting program instead of thisEconomics? The answer is simple : An American accounting degree may guaranteeme a good position in your country ,however ,as my real intention is to return to Chi-na to resume my happy life here ,an Master’s degree in Economics is certainly a bet-ter choice because the US accounting rules are different from what China adopts.This thoughtful choice of my program proves that your reasoning to reject my visa isjust not right.

2. People go to US for better life. But if life is good enough at home ,no body would becrazy to abandon their country. Considering the take home pay ,bonuses and corpo-rate perks ,my real income is very close ,if not exceed ,to those of my college friendswho work in the United States.

The clock has turned around during the last few years as China experienced an eco-nomic boom and young professionals like me caught the opportunities of life. I wouldnot throw away everything that I have obtained and am proud of to plunge myselfinto chaotic future by illegally staying in the United States after my Master’s pro-gram. The United States is always the greatest country that I admire ,however ,whenit comes to career development and personal fortune ,my hope is in China. With thisAmerican Master’s degree in hand ,my future in China will be much more greater !

3. I have a perfect family. My husband, who owns an accounting firm in S City andhires about a dozen accountants, is a college sweet heart of mine and a successful ac-countant himself. He is the one never ever wanted to go to US because his businessis too busy to leave behind. If be did ,he may lose his business first and his wife sec-ond because he can not possibly continue his career in your country. Love is price-less, but as you American would like to say: NO MONEY, NO HONEY. My hus-band , the smart accountant ,will be staying where the money is. Alter all , betweenbeing a boss of an established accounting firm in China and a fledgling dishwasher inthe US ,my husband would choose the former. The successful business that my hus-band is doing is another reason why I will definitely come back. Everybody maywant to stay in your country ,but we are exceptions because of our exceptional goodlife here and now in our own country!

4. Having given all the above reasons, I trust that you will understand why I am goingto pursue an Master’s degree in economics rather than a degree in accounting in yourcountry. I am very much excited about the greater opportunities, broad career op-tions ,higher social status and many ,many more that my American Master’s degreeand my American experience will bring to me when I return.

I respectfully request that you give me a favorable review on my visa application basedon mv previous argument.

Sincerely ,

范例20.3 翻译

尊敬的签证官:

我学生签证申请在1997年8月1日被拒绝。根据签证官拒签的理由,是由于作为一个会计师我不应该去美国读经济学,因此我没有一个实在学习计划因而根据“逻辑推理”我就有移民倾向。

我理解这位签证官拒签决定背后的“逻辑”。我也不否认许多中国的签证申请者并没有一个真正的学习计划,只是把F1签证当作进入他们美国移民程序的门票。但是,不管有多少人梦想移民美国,我绝对是那种没有移民倾向的人。别人的美梦不是我的过错。请听我下列的申辩:

1.作为中国南方投资银行的高级会计师,在获得中国最好的商学院——中国财政金融大学的会计学位后,我已经在事业和个人生活两方面享受了四年了不起的成功。去美国攻读一个更高的学位,是进一步推动我在国内的事业的一个重要步骤,而不是为了抛弃我在中国的工作和家庭。我为什么没有选择会计学硕士而去读这个经济学学位?回答是很简单的:一个美国的会计学位也许能够保证我在贵国得到一份好的工作,但是,由于我的真实愿望是回国享受我的幸福生活,这个经济学学位显然是一个更好的选择,因为美国的会计规则和中国使用的完全不一样。我的这个深思熟虑的选择证明了你们的拒签实在是不对的。

2.人们去美国的目的是为了更好的生活。但是如果在国内的生活足够好的话,没有人会发疯放弃自己美好的家园。考虑到我的实际工资,各种福利和额外收入,我的全部收入已经非常接近,假如不是超过的话,我那些在美国工作的同学朋友。过去的几年,中国的经济起飞和我们这些抓住了终生难逢的机会的年轻专业人士,使得世界刮目相待。在我获得经济学硕士学位之后,我不会甩掉我在国内已经获得的并深感骄傲的这一切,把自己抛入一个动荡不安的非法居留的未来。美国永远是一个我赞赏的伟大的国家,但是,说到事业的发展和个人的财富,我的希望在中国。手捧一个美国的硕士学位,我在中国的前途当会更加激动人心!

3.我有一个幸福的家庭。我的丈夫,在S城拥有一个雇着十几个会计的财务公司,是我在大学时期的甜心同时他自己也是一个成功的会计师。他是那种绝对不想去美国的人,因为他的公司太忙,他不可能离开。如果他离开他的事业的话,也许他会先丢失他的事业再丢失他的妻子,因为他在美国是不可能继续他在中国的成功的。

爱情是无价的,但是正如美国人爱说的那样:没有钱,没有甜(No money,No honey)。我的会计师的文夫,一个聪明的会计师,知道如何计算他的家庭生活:他将选择哪里有钱哪安家。说到底,是在国内做一个成功的财务公司的老板,还是在美国做一个洗碗的学徒工,我想我丈夫会选择前者。我丈夫的成功也是我一定会回来的原因。也许所有人都想留在美国,但是我们却与众不同,因为我们在自己的国家有着与众不同的成功!

4.给了你上述的理由,我相信现在你们会理解为什么我去读经济学而非会计学。当我完成学业回国之后,这个美国经济学硕士学位将给我带来更好的机会,更多的职业选择,更高的社会地位,以及许许多多的其他好处,对此我已经开始非常地激动起来。

我充满敬意地请求你根据我上面的申述给我的签证申请一个有利的复审。

忠诚的,

 

范例20.4 分析

该申请者的案例比较弱:以自己会计学历的背景去美国一个普通的小学校读经济学硕士,因此被拒签两次。

申请者的情况比较困难。如果她申请会计硕士,可以得到比较好的学校的录取,但被拒签的可能更大,难度更大,因为美国会计在美国找工作顺理成章,显然有移民倾向。而经济学这样的纯人文学科在美国签证官眼中、以及一般美国人眼中是一个没有用处的学历。花费巨大代价去美国学这么一个美国人认为没有用处的学历当然是可疑的:学习目的不明,有移民倾向。但是在美国没有用的学历在中国未必没有用。事实上美国教育过剩而中国却紧缺各种人才。在目前中国的人才市场上,绝大多数从美国回来学成归来的留学生,总能够找到比较好的位置。这是一个不用争辩的事实,是签证官不用思考也能接受的大气候。所以申请者在这里告诉美国签证官她的经济学对于她回国后的好处,用利益原则打

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