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范例4.1 提要

申请考概况

某外语学校毕业，已经工作七八年，丈夫全奖在加拿大读物理学博士她申请探亲签证两次被拒

拒签理由

有移民倾向资金不够

申诉重点

一个极其优秀的物理学家，不可能为了在加拿大打黑工放弃专业前途丈夫曾经去过德国并按时回来了，那么按照推理他也会从加拿大按时回来自己在中国也很成功，并且工资并不比加拿大的女人少我是不会花五六年的时间，达到一个在加拿大挣低工资的水平的我们这样的人是中国新一代成功人士说我们有移民倾向是无视中国辉煌现实和前景以及这种前景给我们带来的机会我们虽然有资格申请加拿大独立移民，但是我们没有如果申请的话，我们早已经拿到移民签证了但是我们对移民不感兴趣(我们没有提交过申请就是证明)所以你们不该因为我们没有移民倾向而以“移民倾向”来惩罚我


范例4.2 原文

Dear Visa Officer ,

My visa application was re]ected twice by your office (file No. 123 456 789). Iunderstand that it is your duty to prevent potential immigrants, or people withoutsufficient money from entering Canada ,in order to protect Canadian public’s interests.However ,I strongly believe that your rejection to my application is not fair nor reason-able because of the following reasons :

l. My husband and I do have sufficient ties to our home country which will "ensure ourdeparture from Canada" after mv husband finishes his Ph. D. program from the Uni-versity of Nova Scotia.

My husband, I.iu Aixue, now a Ph. D. candidate at the Institute of Space andAtmospheric Studies in Nova Scotia University, is a talented young space physicistwho has achieved China national prominence in his field. He graduated fromTsinghua University , China’s most prestigious university , and also has a Masterrsdegree from China Academy of Science , the highest research institute in China forscientific researches. He has been doing research work in the Space Research Centerof China Academy of Science for six years. In 1994, he was awarded the "ABCPrize", the top award in space physics in China , for his brilliant scientific researchwork .

My husband and I will NOT violate the stipulations of our visitor’s visa in Canada be-cause,without legal status,it is impossible for him to find a job in Canada due to thenature of his space science research. And because of my husband’s high status andbright prospect in the field of space’ research , it is unimaginable for him to abandonhis research in order to remain in Canada illegally. Doing space researcb is the onlything that my husband is capable of doing. He would HOt trade his brilliant careerfor a dishwasher’s job in Canada,and worse yet,an illegal job.

The University of Nova Scotia is not the top university in Canada ,but the programmy husband studies IS. Dr. Alan Meison,my husband’s Ph. D. supervisor at the U. of N. S. ,is the world leader in this field and is one of the twelvedirecting editors at J. A. T. P. tthe Journal of Aerospace Technology Physics) , theworld-leading magazine for my husband’s science. Dr. Meison is the only Canadianrepresentative in this authoritative magazine. Dr. Meison offered my husband a Ph.D. scholarship after my husband published a major thesis in J. A. T. P,which Dr.Meison edits. My husband is scheduled to finish his program for about four years.The seientific achievement and the good luck that brought my husband to Dr. AIMeison the world leader in slxace physics should not be the very reason thatpunishes his family.

I would like to present one more fact that may help you to determine that myhusband WILL leave Canada after his program: from April 1993 to October 1993 ,mv husband visited and did research at KGE Institute Fur Aeronomie , Germany?svery number one research center for space physics. My husband returned fromGermany as scheduled even though he did have opportunities to stay for a Ph. D.program. We are law-abiding people and will always do the same no matter it isGermany or Canada."2. With a take home pay of more than $ 13, OOO CND annually, I myself is also asuccessful young professional in China. I have been working for Hitachi at its BeijingHeadquarters for six years and am the supervisor of the Planning Group of HitachiChina now. My salary is at the top range among any female employees in any ofJapanese companies in Beijing. My career at Hitachi is built through my languageskills in Chinese,Japanese and Korean. It will take me another five to ten years tostruggle with English just to get a lower income job in Canada. At the age of 30 andat China’s economic boom,I am not gning to force my own life from prosperity inChina to poverty in Canada. I will be crazy to abandon my good life and good careerin China to work as a waitress,or best of all,as a secretary in Canada. The brightfuture and great prospect that summons mv husband back to China will also compelme to return.

A net income of $ 13, 000 CND per year in China,l am very proud that my currentsalary is no lower than many female workers make in Canada.

I have saved enough money to support both my husband and myself and even toraise my husbandls living standard in Canada. Suspecting other Chinese applicant’sfinancial ability may be a reasonable practice, hnwever , refusing my visa on thegrountl of insufficient funtls is just not right because of my long time good salaryhistory with Hitachi.

3. A promising young scientist my husband ,and a successful young professional myself ,we are among the best people that deserve a visitor’s visa. I do understand that manyChinese students during the past did not return to China as stipulated by their visaterms, but time has changed. The case of me and my husband characterizes the newlife pattern for the generation of young educated people. We have good life here ,wehave good career ,and we just want get some Western experience to make our futurebetter in China.

4. Last but not the least,I want to tell you a plan that we killed two years ago. SomeCanadian immigration consultants and lawyers referred by our friends approached usto ask us applying for Canadian independent immigration because they say that myhusband has a strong qualification (he speaks fluent English) . Thousands of Chinesepeople did send in their immigration applications to your Embassy. But we never dideven though we could. Had we applied two years ago, we would have had ourimmigration ’visas in hand today and do not have to struggle for the visitor’s visanow. We did nnt apply for immigration beeause we are not interested inimmigration , but I am being punished for "immigration intention" because I did notsubmit my immigratinn applieation.

Based on the above statement, I respectfully request that you re-evaluate myapplication for a visitor’s visa to see my husband. Your favorable consideration isgreatly appreciated.

Sincerely ,

范例4.3 翻译

尊敬的签证宫：

我的签证申请连续两次遭到你们的拒绝(申请号码123456789)。我理解这是你们的职责去防止潜在的移民、或没有足够金钱支持自己的人进入加拿大，以保护加拿大人的公众利益。但是，我强烈地相信你们对我的拒签是不公平的也是不合理的由于下列几个原因：

1.我的丈夫和我在我们的祖国确确实实拥有足够的关系能够“确保我们离开加拿大”，当我的丈夫读完他在University of Nova Scotia的博士学位之后。我的丈夫，刘爱学——现任位于University of Nova Scotia空间及大气研究所的博士候选人——是一个才华横溢的空间物理学家并在他的领域享有全国性声望。他毕业于清华大学，中国最著名的大学；并有一个硕士学位来自中国科学院，中国科学研究的最高机构。他在中科院的空间研究所从事科研工作已经历时六年。1994年，他曾荣获“ABC科技奖”——中国空间物理界的最高荣誉——以表彰他杰出的科学研究工作。

我的丈夫和我将不会违反加拿大访问签证所规定各种条款，因为，如果没有合法身份，他绝对不可能在加拿大找到任何一份工作，鉴于他那空间科学研究工作的特性。更由于我丈夫在空间研究领域里的地位和前途，非常难以想象他会放弃他的研究工作，仅仅为了落得加拿大的一个非法居留。从事空间研究工作是我丈夫唯一能够做的事情。他岂会拿他辉煌的科学生涯来换取一个在加拿大法碗的工作，况且更坏的是，这个工作还是一个黑工。

The University of Nova Scotia在加拿大并非一个王牌大学，但是我丈夫深造的这个博士项目却是(世界一流)。爱伦梅森博士，我

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